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Peace Habila Wins N100k For The #ValentineContest 

The brain is very good at finding reasons not to attempt. But if you don’t attempt you will neither fail nor succeed. Yet failure is an integral part of success. ~ Cmoni The winner of our #ValentineContest emerged with 6 nominations but I would like you to read my commentary first. Let me begin by saying that I’m enjoying our sessions more and I’m sure you may be wondering why this is so. I will tell you. Following Seth Godin has been transformative in many ways. I don’t miss his weekly Akimbo podcasts. Please follow this him and thank me later. Godin made me realise that plurality is a myth.  You don’t need the numbers to be good at what you do. All you need is the smallest viable audience and the determination to show up consistently for them, and yourself too. Yes, when you teach, you learn. This is why I enjoy a session with 2 attendees as much as I do with a dozen people. Of course, I know about the saying “the more the merrier” but sailors also say “the fewer on board the larger the loot”. In any case, what I’m saying is that like fine wine, we are progressing fine! I intend to hold at least 12 sessions/contests this year. But not without your support. It can be 24, 36 or more but at the very minimum, we should have 12. Ok, let’s dive in. Do you know the origin of the word essay? You can look up the etymology on Google. Essay derives from the French word essai. It means trial or attempt. An essayist attempts. We try to convey our thoughts, ideas, and opinions as the case may be. Of course, not every story can be described as an essay but even your best fiction or poem reflects your thoughts..or at least some of it. Now it’s sad to see that some works didn’t qualify for this contest because they didn’t fully comply with the instructions. Some didn’t meet the word count or deadline while others were either not published on a platform or included digital products from other sources. I encourage you to learn from this unsuccessful attempt. That is the essence of what we are doing. Learning from attempts, both the successful and unsuccessful ones, and building on the lessons learned. However, it’s important to emphasize this; Writers should be able to comprehend and follow instructions or at least seek clarification.  One of my lecturers, Prof Igbigbi used to say that understanding or misunderstanding the question is part of the exam. In the first case, you will pass if you know the answer. If you don’t have the answer you can say what you understood by the question and earn some marks. (Medical students can relate) But once you misunderstand the question, you have already started failing. So always read, understand, and comply with the instructions. Seek clarification when you think it’s ambiguous or confusing. Furthermore, we need to allocate adequate time to tasks, or else we rush through and commit avoidable errors. For instance, I was planning a joint project with a friend. and we were to launch this 1st quarter of the year. Well, I did some reflection and realised I was moving too fast. I work 30+hrs/week. I am committed to work-related training until March 29th. I’m also writing a book in a year. I remotely run 2 businesses. I have an ongoing building project. I administer 3 platforms including this one. If you add regular chores like school runs, walks, gym, etc..whew! I considered all I had on my table and realised how tough it would be to add more. Thus, I suggested that we use the first quarter of 2024 to fully conceptualise the project, particularly the revenue profile, before launching. So consider all your engagements and allow adequate time to achieve tasks. I wrote about this here. Don’t postpone until the last day because you will make mistakes. I have also repeatedly advised writers to use editing apps like Grammarly to correct grammatical errors. At our level, it is disappointing to see works dotted with countless red marks. As an editor your first reaction is to trash such drafts and I do that all the time. I only edit drafts with few pardonable errors. Again we also agreed to get our domains on platforms like Medium, LinkedIn, substack etc It is for our good. If you don’t get published elsewhere at least you can do that yourself. And in doing this you will learn more about publishing online. You will learn to hyperlink texts, embed images and videos and other skills that enrich your work. Now let me tell you this. I get a lot of joy from reading my old stories because they remind me of my progress as a writer. Improve your social media presence. And by this, I don’t mean scrolling and chatting away your time. Be productive, engage and follow those who post about your interests. My stories titled Digital Holy Grail did justice to this point. Moreover, it is a great way to build your platform as a writer. This counselling may sound elementary, but it’s worth repeating because we are never too big for small errors. The craft can be simple but not necessarily easy and we know this because we chose it. As I said previously I’m committed to this journey and I urge everyone to put in the extra effort. It is simpler when we navigate together. Recall that at the end of last year, we agreed to reward excellence. It is a step forward after a period of paying out tokens of encouragement to many. This is the right path for many reasons among which are these 3. We have passed the beginners stage. Yes, we are writing a book in a year and will also pass that stage soon enough. (More on this later) In addition to writing, we are learning other skills like publishing,

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Essay Competition: Week 22 Winners.

Undeserved Happiness by Augusta Ndeche and Bonus by Peace Habila are the winners of week 22. Augusta started her intriguing essay with fluid reflections on mortality and then quickly switched to the present in such a seamless manner that the reader never stops till the explosive end. A judge described her ability thus: “Her imaginative power is out of this world. Huge potential”. Congrats Augusta, that was a beautiful piece of writing and I urge everyone to read it.   Peace wrote with her usual flow. She makes the reader comfortable with excellent use of simple english with good punctuations and figures of speech. Her story was captivating and well concluded. “Did I tell you I got married to the CEO few months ago?” is a clincher any day. Congrats Peace, keep writing.       Feedback: The judges commended all the writers and agreed that they displayed great talents and initiative but to harness their full potentials the following recommendations were made. 1. They need to learn to spell-check and to have an eye for details. 2. Majority need to do a lot of proof-reading. 3. Some try to impress with big vocabulary which distracts from otherwise great essays. Vocabulary is good but only when it is used with ease in such a way that it appears natural. One essay looked like the writer was consulting a dictionary to decide what word to add to the essay. 4. Punctuation still remains a problem. 5. This crop of writers raised the game. It is getting better and better. Thank you for writing and reading.

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Essay Competition: Week 18 Winners.

We have our two YOUNG winners for week 18. Oluremi Daniel and Johnson Onyedikachi have won with their essays titled You Might As Well Live and Keep Surviving.   Oluremi announced his entry into the competition by impressing a Judge so much that he was awarded a prize as encouragement. Clearly, he is a good writer and in this piece on suicide, he introduced it with a short story/example before taking the reader through a detailed analysis of the problem. He concluded in style with an excerpt from Dorothy Parker’s poetry after making some suggestions. Johnson has always been impressive. Still writing on suicide his analogous treatise on humans and camels is so evoking that a Judge scored him tops for “strength of content and style of writing”. We had many good entries. Emmanuel Oluka’s well-structured piece titled When Two Elephants Fight beautifully dissected the protracted imbroglio between ASUU and the federal government. While Don’t Give Up by Humble Ogbonna examined the issue of suicide in details. It laid bold emphasis on salient points and also offered solutions. Feedback: A Judge took the time to make corrections on each essay and we have sent them back to the writers as feedback. Congrats to our two winners, we hope to read more from them. And congrats to all of us we are all winners and will keep winning.

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Essay Competition: Week 14 Winner.

Emmanuel Chukwuemeka Oluka is the winner of the N10,000 cash prize for week 1 with the essay titled: I Support Zoning “With My Full Chest”. Emmanuel is one of our pioneer writers in this competition. He has won previously in week 4 alongside Bolaji when their impressive essays couldn’t be separated. This time he appealed for his title to be retained by the editor as “it was deliberately captioned to reflect the content of the essay as can be seen in the introductory paragraphs and concluding paragraph”. Well, the editor obliged and here we are. Congrats Emmanuel. We will love to read more from you. Feedback Infidelity In Relationships: Causes And Effects by Emmanuel Enaku, The Politics Of Zoning: A Solution In Nigeria’s Pluralism by Opara Udochukwu, Cheating In Love by Johnson Onyedikachi and Infidelity: A Ravaging Virus by Mercy Ofem are great essays that made the top five. The writers are encouraged to keep pushing the pen. The following are some points listed by a judge who is equally a seasoned educationist as assessment considerations. 1. Grammatical errors, wrong spelling and wrong punctuation. 2. Obvious carelessness in re-reading or cross-checking work. 3. Lack of creativity/originality. 4. Verbosity and repetitions. 5. The use of unnecessary words to impress. 6. Not paragraphing. Sign that that such a person is a Facebook writer and has to know the difference between writing officially and then on social media. 7. Boring and awkward start of paragraphs. 8. The use of a singular and connecting plural words in a sentence. (b). Digits and figures in words in writing. 9. A disconnect between the caption and the body of the essay. 10. Professional v. leisure spot writing. 11. A lack of flow between paragraphs. Haphazard style of writing. Writers are advised to take note to enhance their chances of winning. We thank you all for being part of this journey. Next up will be the topics for week 15.

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Essay Competition: Week 13 Winner.

Humble Ogbonna has won the N10,000 cash prize for week 13 with the essay titled: An Embarrassing ‘Flagrant Delicto’. A judge described the essay thus: “This is it for me. I love the good command of English and sequencing. The story is relatable, probably because I understood the struggle of avoiding children’s food in schools. Again, I actually tried to align it with the other essay topic, the effect of poverty on social life….without much effort and a different ending, this could also win it.” Unfortunately, Humble provided no picture for easy identification. However, the fact that a first entry won this week’s competition shows that we have to watch out for more essays from this writer. Congrats and keep writing.   Feedback A very interesting week 13! The topics were diverse but overall soul searching. Insecurity In Northern Nigeria And Possible Solutions by Oluka Emmanuel is a top essay. Well written with detailed points and attributes. Oluka seamlessly blends his creative and research writing skills. Caught Red Handed by Favour Charles and Through The Eyes Of An ‘Other’ by Rekanor Mbeh are worthy mentions. These writers will go places with their writing skills We received 16 entries this week. Fourteen in all. One failed to meet the word count and the rest were published. Please endeavour to read the instructions for each week and also read our general rules. While we compete to win in every competition, we must not lose sight of the objective here which is to get us writing, reading and thinking. That is how we become better writers, readers, thinkers and ultimately better humans! We thank you all for being part of this journey. Next up will be the topics for week 14.

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Essay Competition: Week 12 Winner.

Johnson Onyedikachi has won the N10,000 cash prize for this week with his essay titled: Living. For a teenager, Johnson is definitely one to watch. A judge had this to say: “His grammar is above board. His ability to keep the readers attending is topnotch. He makes a simple short event very eventful with his flowery use of words. He definitely compels one’s attention” The judge continued “the content is what any Nigeria reader can relate to. A non-Nigerian reader would also understand the general theme due to the way he draws one in”. Well done Johnson, we can’t wait to read more from you. Feedback Political Party Defections: A Spanner In The Works by Emmanuel Oluka. “The premise is sound, very few grammatical errors. The writer is also able to hold the attention of the reader and communicate effectively. His thoughts follow a logical order with a good conclusion.” Getting Stronger Through Tough Moments by Folarin Oluwatimilehin and A Resultant Effect In The Absence Of Structured Political Ideology by Victor Okonjo made the top three. They were both good essays. Again we received many entries this week. Fourteen in all. Twelve were published and two didn’t make it for failing to meet the word count and deadline. Please endeavour to read the instructions for each week and also read our general rules. It has been three months of essay writing and by the time we do six months many of us would have started writing a book. We thank our judges, writers and the audience. Thanks for being part of this journey. Next up will be the topics for week 13

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Essay Competition: Week 11 Winner.

Peace Habila has won the week 11 N10,000 cash prize with her essay titled: Sand In My Garri. Peace is one of our consistent writers. She is a natural creative writer and this time her beautiful prose flowed so easily with a balanced combination of evocation and immediacy. Her diction was also excellent in this fluid piece of artistic creation. Congratulations Peace, we believe you will go places with your pen. Feedback Bolaji Alade once again displayed his talent in Reducing The Cost Of Governance In Nigeria. He did his research well and introduced the topic seamlessly. However, this essay could have nicked the prize if it explored more points on addressing the problem. Chukwuemeka Mbam also sent in another good piece No One Wants To Bell The Cat. The writer is good with words and displayed his creativity in developing the topic. But the topic was not for a creative essay. He could have scored more with better exposition and arguments. Shattered Pieces by Oladejo Victor and The Agbero Customer by Ojetunde Esther impressed a judge for their imagery and dialogue respectively while Finding Myself by Arueze Chisom Precious got this commendation from another judge “It is original and captivating. It is also the only one I read three times which says a lot about how interesting and well written it is”. We got the most entries this week. Fifteen in all and they were all good essays. Congrats everyone. We can only get better. We appreciate our judges, writers and the audience. Thanks for being part of this journey. Next up will be the topics for week 12

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Essay Competition: Week 10 Winner.

Ebube Ezeadum has won the N10,000 cash prize for week 10 with his essay titled: What Happens When Like Poles Are Allowed To Attract.  The writer flowed easily in this beautiful prose. He made an effort to research the subject, interrogated all sides of the argument biblically and otherwise before reaching a very logical conclusion.  A judge described Ebube as “one beautiful writer”. Congrats Ebube, we hope to read more from you. Feedback Saberedowo Oluwafisayo: Absolutely beautiful!  Well-referenced. He had compelling points to support his position. However, a better-developed essay with a stronger conclusion would have earned the writer more marks and perhaps the prize. Keep writing! Folarin Oluwatimilehin: Folarin has been consistent. In this essay, however, he derailed a bit by focusing on the Pope rather than the effects of the Pope’s pronouncement on the Institution of Marriage. His conclusion seemed rushed but a good essay nevertheless. Oladejo Victor: Victor has a way with words. He was first noticed for his artistry and creative imagery. However, his missive this time seemed to be lost in excessive imagery. His tenses and punctuation needs to be worked on too. But it is still another good attempt. Congrats everyone. We can only get better. We appreciate our judges, writers and the audience. Thanks for being part of this journey.Next up will be the topics for week 11.

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Essay Competition: Week 9 Winner.

Chukwuemeka Mbam has won again. The Phases Of Thunder by Chukwuemeka Mbam has won the N10,000 cash prize for week 9. Chukwuemeka is proving that he has what it takes to compete with other writers. With an introduction that captured the boiling point of the topic in 2017, he developed his essay by navigating through the origin of the Nigerian Police force and structured his discussion into segments that painted a concise chronology of the events with details to drive home his argument. He concluded with suggestions on how the government should with police reform and inclusive governance. Congrats Chukwuemeka. We know you will go places with your skill. We appreciate our judges, our writers and the audience. Thanks for being part of this journey. Next up will be the topics for week 10.

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Essay Competition: Week 8 Winner.

Oyinola wins again! Our winning essay for week 8 is Youths: Nigeria’s Hope For Leadership by Oyinola Abosede. Oyinola has been one of the most consistent writers in this competition. As usual, he always takes time to show the reader that he knows the rudiments of the craft. Starting from a concise introduction that leaves no one in doubt of what the essay is all about to his identification of the problems with developed arguments, Oyinola flows with ease. The strongest point in this entry is the fact that he gave some detailed suggestions. That is the hallmark of a good research text. Well done Oyinola, we know we will keep reading from you. Note: The announcement of a winner was extended and we wanted to publish entries received after the deadline. However, we couldn’t as the fatigue and logistic problems of a hectic previous week lingered. We apologise for this. Worthy of note is that the following essays earned plaudits and ranked among the top 5 for both judges. Revoking Nigeria’s Aged Leadership: The Pathway For Youths by Ogbaga Sunday. A Friend To Meet by Sodiq Saberedowo. A Divinely Orchestrated Friend by Folarin Oluwatimilehin. and Gold In Rags by Maryann Ndu. The writers including newbies among them will definitely go places with the pen. We thank our judges for doing a great job. We also appreciate our growing pool of writers and audience. Thanks for being part of this journey. Next up will be the topics for week 9.  

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Essay Competition: Week 7 Winner.

Ladies and gentlemen, our winning essay for week 7 is Thumb Crowning by Mbam Chukwuemeka. From a judge: “Please give this man a beer on me! That was good!! From the first word here, he got my full attention until the last paragraph. His presentation was good, and how he always finds a way to bring in Titi into the conversation tells me he is a very good writer” Congratulations Mbam Chukwuemeka on your first win. Keep writing! Some feedback 1. Lest We Forget In A Hurry by Prince Chime. “He drew me into his world with his introduction (I loved it) and did a good job by bringing to fore Achebe’s stellar contributions to the literary world but could have developed the story better with a personal touch. There is talent here” 2. Our Origin: The Nigerian Divide by Aaron Livingstone. “He made valid points in his presentation, and the layout was good and unambiguous which made it easy to follow his presentation” 3. The gods Of Social Media by Osanyinro Oluwaseun. Good essay but needs to be more engaging and evocative” We received fewer entries this week for a good reason. We focused on #EndSARS. We support the ongoing protests and we call on the government to embark on total reformation of not just the police but our entire security architecture. We wish to thank our sponsors, readers, writers and everyone for their support. Next up will be the topics for week 8.

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Essay Competition: Week 6 Winner.

We have our winner for week 6. Both judges unanimously picked I Did Not Want To Die Yet by Osanyiro Oluwaseun. Osanyiro is proving to be a writer with flair. Writing on her experience with alcoholism she used the first paragraph to introduce her topic in an exquisitely creative manner that had the reader captivated and wanting more. She then beautifully developed the topic in a flowing narrative with quick recollections that didn’t derail the immediacy of her story. She concluded with the lesson she learnt. And as usual, her grammar, structure and punctuation were all accurate.  Congratulations on your second winning Osanyiro. You obviously took the judges’ recommendation last week. Keep writing! We received 15 entries out of which 14 were published. One was not published for reasons which were communicated to the writer. Unfortunately, we are not able to provide feedback this week as we worked on a tight schedule, however, we will resume in subsequent weeks. Caution: Last week we discovered plagiarised contents in one of the essays and it has also been discovered in another this week. It is clearly stated in our general rules that we have zero tolerance for plagiarism. This exercise is a journey to help us get better in reading, writing and thinking so plagiarists will be disqualified henceforth. It is noteworthy to say here that our 12 judges so far have worked independently. Yet each time they have either arrived at the same pick or had at least two essays in their top three. It is incredible and it can only mean we have chosen well and we are also doing well. We have to applaud our judges for this so please stand up wherever you are and give a round of applause for them. “clap! clap!! clap!!!” Thank you. That was a rousing one. We wish to thank our sponsors, readers, writers and everyone for their support. The community is growing bigger and better so stay with us! Next up will be the topics for week 7.

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Essay Competition: Week 4 Winner.

Dear good people, we have our winner/s of the cmonionline essay competition week 4. Once again the following 2 essays made the top 3 for both judges. An Overview Of Edo State Gubernatorial Election: Lessons And Regrets by Bolaji Alade. The 2020 Edo Gubernatorial Polls: Intrigues And Lessons Learnt by Chukwuemeka Oluka. As previously noted by a judge, Bolaji will make a good research writer. His diction and structure are great. He introduced his topic by referring the reader to the 2nd law in Robert Greene’s best selling 48 laws of power. He then developed it by relating the law to the events of the Edo guber elections before proceeding to discuss the lessons learnt from the election. He concluded with a suggestion which could have been better developed for lucidity and as usual served us a bibliography. However, one thing is evident; Bolaji improved by adding more original ideas this time as recommended by the judge. Good work all round. Chukwuemeka Oluka has established himself as a natural writer with an easy flow. His introduction was styled much like a media report, taking the reader through the events leading up to the election before delving into the core issues and dissecting the lessons learnt therein. He distinguished himself as a critical thinker with a poignant point when he stated thus: Meanwhile, this party is supposed to and does actually choose the ministers, ambassadors and security officials that engage in negotiations on behalf of the country and as well, saddled with addressing the intricate socio-cultural, political and economic challenges of a country like Nigeria. Yet, the hierarchy of the ruling party was unable to see the bigger picture. We just can’t agree more with this objectivity and frankly, it is the highlight of week 4 for me. This was a very good essay, rich in content and equally well structured. Kudos Chukwuemeka. As I am unable to break the tie I will have to award a cash price of N10,000 each to these two writers because not only do they deserve it, they have consistently sent in entries without being discouraged when they didn’t win. I hope this will encourage them to do better. That’s the whole idea. Congrats guys! More feedback: Ifekrisiti: “An excited tone, a very good storyteller but needs to improve in consistency and continuity. Also, try and incorporate parts of speech like metaphors to deliver punchlines” Bolaji: “Well worded, very consistent, use of metaphors and citations, grammar impeccable, and the bibliography a nice addition. However, add more storytelling to develop some points further” Oluwaseun: “Good storyline, wordings are good, use of nice catchphrases, very explicit and easy to understand” Emmanuel Chukwuemeka: “Well worded with flow and consistency. Use of metaphors and catchphrases. Very distinct in writing and delivery. Grammar is top-notch as well as easy to understand and readable. Very communicative as well.” Oyinola: “Well worded, had a good flow with good citations and references. However, you can improve in clarity and brevity with your conclusion” Osifo Daniel: “Good grammar, delivery and storytelling skills. But the writer would have done a great job if he had the patience to recheck their work..always EDIT! Now that’s about it. Thanks to everyone for their support especially our judges and sponsors. And once again congratulations to our writers and readers. We are doing well..oin! Next up will be the topics for week 5.

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Essay Competition: Week 2 Winner.

Ladies and gentlemen, we have our winner/s of the cmonionline essay competition week 2. The winning essay is “Effect Of Foreign Debts On Nigeria’s Infrastructural Development by Oyinola Abosede” Oyinola introduced his topic well by incorporating a personal account of his interaction with a public official on the subject matter. He then developed it with sound arguments giving examples with relevant statistics and facts to emphasize the points raised. He concluded by making suggestions. His diction, syntax, punctuation and paragraphing were equally good. Congratulations to Oyinola for winning the N10,000:00 cash prize. You wrote in last time and improved this time to nick the 1st position. You can be proud of your essay and we certainly look forward to more entries from you. The publisher has also awarded N5,000:00 cash prize each to encourage the two other writers that made the top 3. How Nigerians Chose Big Brother Naija Over The Presidential Election by Aaron Livingstone.      2. Letter From The Future by Folarin Oluwatimilehin. While Aaron wrote in for the first time, Folarin is a previous winner and has once again shown that he is a talent to look out for. We are glad and honoured to encourage both of them in their writing journey. Congratulations guys. For obvious reasons, we had more entries than in the 1st week out of which 10 good essays were published. The others didn’t make our editorial standards for various reasons already listed here. Furthermore, as this is a collective learning process we will now be providing some tips from the judges’ feedback. This week we noted that the grading rubric across various disciplines particularly in Africa often attach more weight to content since English isn’t our mother tongue. Moreover, it can be argued that diction or language is about communicating effectively and not necessarily precisely. Yet adequate emphasis must be laid on good grammar, syntax and punctuation especially in creative writing, prose, poetry where style is crucial to evocation which is at the core of that literary genre. Thus our editorial standard is such that we ALWAYS trash any work dotted with red lines leaving no option to ascertain its contents. So please always double-check your grammar and punctuation. Also, endeavour to read the instructions carefully to enhance your chances of winning. Provide a short bio and a bright pic within the recommended size (Oyinola Abosede take note). Caption your essay in your own words. We provide topics, not titles. This exercise is a journey to create a unique audience of not just writers but readers and thinkers. We wish to thank everyone for their support especially our judges and sponsors. And once again congratulations to our writers and readers. We have taken off well and will even get better. Please remember that we are all winners!  

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